Nice poem and good rhyming. But I agree with Robe about a few words that needs to be rewritten. Like "quite" instead of "quit", "rightful heir to royal throne", "King Minos' brother or was he truly his own", consider "from gods across the sea" instead of "from the gods by the sea". Wool is obtained from sheep and not from cattle. Try this line instead: "So grand in stature, a great wonder to all".
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