Do we ever really grow up, comments or critique welcome please, thanks?

You and your poetry are so full of life. The iambic meter suits this down to the snowy ground - you have a knack of using the right meter and what is amazing is that you use such long lines. The pentameter is bad enough so I find the four stress line easier but you just let it run and it still makes sense without any padding. Structured poetry, yes, you do it well and follow in some awesome traditions without being a copy cat. Absolutely beautiful and uplifting.